Natsuki was incredibly well-written (albeit the grammar errors, but like you said, youre not a native speaker, so its not a huge deal). It was oddly sweet when he gave her peroxide for her wrists. Similar to Act I, Act II was pretty much the same up until MC stops Yuri from stabbing herself. I was immensely satisified when MC told Monika about sleeping with Sayori, and also when Monika apologized to her. I think it really added to the tension of the scene.Ĭontinue this thread level 2 2 points 2 years ago Agree with 99 of what you said.
Im really grateful for the time you took to pinpoint all this, and thanks for allowing me to grow this project more. Ive been talking to REALLY great people about the gramatical issues, so I will update this post once its been improved.įor those who have already played the mod, Ill release a video containing all the added stuff, so you dont need to replay the game, unless its so big of an improvement that its enough excuse, that is. Im sorry I cant be more helpful but I hope these little criticisms point you in the right direction level 2 Original Poster 53 points 2 years ago Im definetly going to update this at a later date, with some tiny little stuff added, and a lot of improved and revised texts.Īs I stated, Im not natively english, nor have I the level to consider myself great, so there is this much I can do by myself. The real reason I decided to comment at all is because I like it so much I want you to make it all that it can be. Id like to be able to pinpoint exact places in the script I remember there being grammatical errors but the truth is, they were pretty consistent straight through the experience where you added dialog.
There are also a few straight up grammatical problems Id like to be more constructive and show you where those are and what needs fixing but I didnt have the wherewithal to take notes while I was playing. Some of the options made me raise an eyebrow but I can tell a lot of thought went into it so you get props regardless.Īn amount of this is to be expected from any mod, but you could help yourself by not using so many slang contractions like gonna, wanna. Press question mark to learn the rest of the keyboard shortcuts Log in sign up User account menu 656 Full Release Doki Doki Literature Club 1.1.0(mo). Ddlc Save Everyone Mod By partbraginte1973 Follow | PublicĪlthough I felt the Act 1 and Act 2 could be worked on a bit more, I really appreciate your work NNDanny.
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